Excellent silhouette of the city...I quite like the way the low lying clouds offer a "shadow" of the city outline.
I think this shot is great man, i could definatly see this being sold in a large print!
Never shot anything like this before, thought these turned out alright:
Second one still needs final touch up, but overall, pretty stoked for a first effort.
Edit: Touch up and different font:
Sam, excellent use of a white wall (i wish i had a blank white wall in my house...), but if you want a bit of CC, on the first, loose the vignette, it just makes the lower half of his body/hands etc look less than appealing, alter your backgrounds colour by moving your subject away or towards it rather than what I find to be 'less than appealing P.S vignette'. Some of the skin tones also look a little red, however, i think you did really well in the 2nd edit, it looks so much better and I think you did really well with that. 2nd one looks like you could use it as like a promotional card or something, well done.
Cheers for that Unlearn, I'd say a bit too much tone mapping - got carried away.
As for the original.
Man, original looks so much better! In saying that, it's good you went and tried something completely different and crazy, sure it didn't work, but shouldn't put you off trying new stuff in Photoshop, trial and error is they key, just take it lightly and learn from it.
Cool natural light candid. Shots like this really can't be said much about as it's just a candid/snapshot, but it looks good.
Callan, i strive my whole life to gain your acceptance, and you just blow me off like some kind of hussy and go scrambling to your other little hoes, i hate you! *cries and runs*
