Ek155
Likes Dirt
Andrew, mate I think there is a whole lot of room for improvement on these. Like it has been said so many times in this thread, really think about the image you are composing before you click. With both of them, there doesn't really seem to be a true subject, and as a viewer I'm left wondering what exactly you are taking a photo of.
With Photo 1, the light in the top left corner is the first distraction. The trees in the bottom left then throw you completely out. Try and simplify what you are showing, however it may be - a higher angle, tighter crop/longer lens being used on the buildings/subjects etc. With Photo 2, same thing - simplify. The sky has to much presence in the image for not enough interest or place - it doesn't create any sense of openness that a clear sky often does. If you had included the foreground and its potential activity it may have been more interesting. The horizon doesn't appear horizontal, and your eye is left with two things to look at that each could have warranted their own shots, the barge and the wheel.
Just some things to think about. You have the exposures pretty down
With Photo 1, the light in the top left corner is the first distraction. The trees in the bottom left then throw you completely out. Try and simplify what you are showing, however it may be - a higher angle, tighter crop/longer lens being used on the buildings/subjects etc. With Photo 2, same thing - simplify. The sky has to much presence in the image for not enough interest or place - it doesn't create any sense of openness that a clear sky often does. If you had included the foreground and its potential activity it may have been more interesting. The horizon doesn't appear horizontal, and your eye is left with two things to look at that each could have warranted their own shots, the barge and the wheel.
Just some things to think about. You have the exposures pretty down