Yeah I like the shot, Nat. I like how the subject is framed between the grass and the railings above and behind him. I like the bore water stains on the wall. What I don't like, however, is the giant tear in the bore water stains, and the amount of OOF in the foreground. I think it could do with a tighter crop on the bottom, but overall I do like the shot. Sorry if this reply is a bit fucked and hard to read, I have just spend the past 4 hours writing 5 different english essays, 3 of which were on poetry. Lucky me.